From: Svjatoslav Agejenko <svjatoslav@svjatoslav.eu>
Date: Wed, 29 Jan 2020 21:33:25 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: better wording
X-Git-Url: http://www2.svjatoslav.eu/gitweb/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=f7e3b5a9fb319b2faf8301d1c06783f9292eeadb;p=sixth.git

better wording
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diff --git a/doc/index.html b/doc/index.html
index 8fdaced..de32807 100644
--- a/doc/index.html
+++ b/doc/index.html
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <html lang="en">
 <head>
 <title>Sixth - system for data storage, computation, exploration and interaction</title>
-<!-- 2020-01-29 K 21:23 -->
+<!-- 2020-01-29 K 23:32 -->
 <meta charset="utf-8">
 <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1">
 <meta name="generator" content="Org-mode">
@@ -256,7 +256,8 @@ Goal is, so called bicycle for the mind.
 
 <p>
 A tool, that provides powerful, extensible, adaptable, hackable, easy
-to use, general purpose environment for working with knowledge.
+to use, general purpose computing environment for working with
+knowledge.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -264,8 +265,8 @@ to use, general purpose environment for working with knowledge.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-I would like to create better general purpose environment with the
-following priorities:
+I would like to create better general purpose computing environment
+with the following priorities:
 </p>
 
 <ul class="org-ul">
@@ -431,7 +432,7 @@ project/approach is an attempt using Java.
 </div></div></div>
 <footer id="postamble" class="">
 <div><p class="author">Author: Svjatoslav Agejenko</p>
-<p class="date">Created: 2020-01-29 K 21:23</p>
+<p class="date">Created: 2020-01-29 K 23:32</p>
 <p class="creator"><a href="http://www.gnu.org/software/emacs/">Emacs</a> 26.1 (<a href="http://orgmode.org">Org-mode</a> 9.1.9)</p>
 </div>
 </footer>
diff --git a/doc/index.org b/doc/index.org
index 6ad774c..fcf563a 100644
--- a/doc/index.org
+++ b/doc/index.org
@@ -40,12 +40,13 @@
 Goal is, so called bicycle for the mind.
 
 A tool, that provides powerful, extensible, adaptable, hackable, easy
-to use, general purpose environment for working with knowledge.
+to use, general purpose computing environment for working with
+knowledge.
 
 [[id:c19c5a3b-dfb0-4f7f-961c-a387b925669f][See extensible, programmable computing environment examples]].
 
-I would like to create better general purpose environment with the
-following priorities:
+I would like to create better general purpose computing environment
+with the following priorities:
 
 + Makes data and insights easy to discover, understand, manipulate,
   transform and visualize.
